Radaketor's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[FakePath]

Oh God are you gonna go all emo on us?
Anyway, the center face is quite good in my honest opinion and the fact that we can't see his eyes make this quite interesting, the colors and the shading is very well done, however i think it would've looked even better if you did at least one of these things.
1- Make his eyes invisible for all the faces like the face at the center
or
2- Not give the third face's lips an upwards curve, it just doesn't look right. He looks more like a cocky guy than an angsty dude.

SileNt-Sam responds:

emo ? nah emo are just looking for attention , put some makeup on and cry like a bitch just because your parents won't pay your internet pills , that's emo in few words
uhmm yeah good points .. honestly i wasn't really planning to post this , i was just sketching around and it turned out kinda nice so i thought i should color it and post it since i haven't post anything for a while , anyways thx for the review ^^

[Freaky Fred]

Pretty good but the mouth is slightly off, Fred has more chin and the mouth doesn't stretch that much to the sides.
Do you think you can do King Ramses next? That would be awesome.

vladjuk responds:

sure, right now a will start sculpting characters from Courage the cowardly dog series

[Lost Derp member of the...]

You need to work a bit on the colors.
I also think you should just draw on a piece of paper, it's easier and most of the times the artwork is better. After a few days of drawing you'll see the improvements and then just scan the drawings and post them on NG.

zombievegeta responds:

It takes months to improve at least for some people.I'm better on computer because when I mess up i'm just one click away from going back with paper I erase so much I tear the paper and then there's holes in the paper.And I don't have money for a photo scanner.I think the colors look fine unless your talking about shading and trust me I suck at shading idk where to put it.

[celtic abomination!!!]

How have you not been scouted yet?

adbejo responds:

i dont know i joined the site like 2 days ago ... i found the site due to jazza videos on youtube and i was a follower of bitey of brackenwood like 1 year ago , lol i didnt know bitey was part of this community so i decide join you guys and make some fan art for pico day ! enjoy .

srry for my rough english im spanish speaker ^^

happy picoday !

[Fiona pin-up]

I'd say that the belly button is not exactly in the middle and it's a bit too long.
Also, the hair that goes over her eyes shouldn't just magically disappear, i see that the lines of the hair are still visible in her eyes, maybe colouring it with a soft shade of yellow would make it more realistic.

SileNt-Sam responds:

oh yeah .. :\
thx i'll remember that next time ^^

[The Frieza Saga]

Looks good but Krillin's armour isn't like that, his armour is black instead of white and he doesn't have any blue tights.
And pleaaaaaaase do one of the Ginyu Force.

BLARGEN69 responds:

Nice catch, I drew the Saiyan armor from memory so I'm not surprised I overlooked that aspect of Krillin when he wears it. Haha the main reason I cut the Ginyu Force out of this picture actually is because like, just about a week or two before uploading this I had uploaded a drawing of the main characters from my comic doing the Ginyu Force pose while dressed in sentai outfits and I didn't think it'd be good doing that twice!

[Dentist Problems]

I don't get the joke

ZleapingBear responds:

Meh... do't worry. it was badly written... point was that he fell and lost his teeth, so now he do not need to go to the dentist again.... yea... not as fun as I thought back then....

[Cowboys and Indians]

Nice colours and i like your style but why is this rated M?

ScreamingLadybug responds:

Thanks :)

Wendy doesn't have a shirt on. I didn't know if I should have left it as E because she was a kid, or M because she was showing her chest. So I did it just to be safe I guess.

[Tmnt]

You shouldn't have taken a picture in black and white, now we don't actually know which is which, but i like it either way.

vladjuk responds:

left to right- Mike, Don, Raph, Leo)

[Pink Everything]

You could've also given her pink socks and pink eyes.

HelloPaolo responds:

I know but I wanted to create SOME sort of contrast.
and heels with socks? that's just silly!