Radaketor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sorceresses Apprentice]

Too bad this was so short and had no background music nor sound effects whatsoever, maybe do an updated version of the game with some of the audio available on Newgrounds? Maybe you can even try and contact some of the voice actors from this site, a lot of them would love to be a part of this.

I could see myself really liking this with some improvements here and there.

Bushmansmeg responds:

that's some nice advice :) definitely be taking that on board
Thanks mate

[Colour]

Good job, you made it look colourful yet blank at the same time, wish there'd been a bigger variety of colours, though, too much blue and not enough green, red and yellow. But nice job nonetheless, very cute.

Are you planning on making more of these?

Sunaboveyou responds:

Thank you and definitely! Though it took a long while the experience of seeing hundreds of drawings on paper come together like this is too cool for words. I'll be coming up with something soon.

[EPIC ADVENTURE - SECRETS OF THE CSIS TRAILER REMAKE]

It looks a bit better than the last trailer you sent but only barely.
The background music and the sound effects were louder than the characters talking at times, the visual effects weren't anything great but they were good enough for what you guys were working with.
You guys still looked awkward in the movie but maybe you could use that to your advantage, why not make your movie a bit less serious and have those two main characters goof around trying to stop Patrick or whatever the guy with a skull mask's name was? I can't buy this as a serious movie if every scene is like they're embarrassed.
I've already told you about the animation idea a bunch of times but you still don't want to try it, fine but at least try the comedic route i told you earlier in the review, that could help your movie seem a bit better.

Master-Awesome responds:

Well, I was going to write action/comedy, but the genre only allows for one. I guess I'll choose comedy.

Update: Actually, I'm surprised at myself that I never really wrote it as comedy as the main genre. Thinking back to my movie, the heroes do goof around and the only guy you can take seriously is Patrick because he seems to plan a lot of things ahead of time.

Patrick also tends to be a killer and why the heroes get screwed is because of the way they goof around.

[Pokemon Golder Part 2]

Pretty nice, those Persona references were really cool.
The audio could use some improvements, sounded a bit too low and the voice acting was a bit emotionless at times.

mattyburrito responds:

Thanks for the critique man is it the dialogue or the BG music that's too low? Maybe I can do some fixes and reupload

[Lonely Day]

Not bad for your first animation, the mouth was synced perfectly, good job on that.
It needs more variety, though, it doesn't look good if it's just 2-3 minutes of a guy walking down a street while it's raining. I also noticed some cut parts here and there, i don't know if they were intentional (they don't look like they were) but they certainly don't fit in.
If you want a pre-loader for your flash animation so it doesn't loop forever Newgrounds offers you some: http://www.newgrounds.com/downloads/preloaders/

Andres00007 responds:

thanks for the tips

[Bloody Nuisance]

The movements of the hamster were very fluid and the voice acting was pretty alright.
It was a short animation but a good one.

WaldFlieger responds:

Cool, thanks!

[Expectations: A Pikachu Tale]

Very well animated with some nice voice acting and a surprise ending.
The shadings were a nice touch, it gave it a distinct and more realistic look.

RetroSleep responds:

Thank you! Shading is a pain in the asss.

[Sparky The Intolerant Spoon - Safety Lessons]

The humour is pretty great with great timing and jokes but the animation wasn't so good, not to mention sometimes we'd hear static when Parky talked.
If you'd try making a new more polished version of this animation i think it would fare much better and get a higher score.

DementedCartoons responds:

Read the description as well

[Hey There Delilah]

I'll give you props for actually animating the whole song but i don't think this is good enough, your animation and designs all looked slacked, the background was almost always white and bland giving this video a very boring feeling.
Keep trying, though, i'm sure you can improve with more practice.

ReyaneAshtar responds:

Thank you for you honesty! I'll definitely put all of those ideas into thought for my next animation!

[Pokemon: Pee Red Version]

This was a very funny interactive movie, good parody.

OrangePylon responds:

Thanks, man.