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[RoboDave 3.0 v.s Volter XXL]

You should link in the author comments section all the older versions of RoboDave from 2014 and 2015, I looked through your art to find them and it's really a nice evolution since the first version from back in '14.
Really neat illustration with far more details than all the previous ones, only things I can really think of that I think you might've missed was getting rid of Carl running away (you had that be a thing in the two previous ones) but I guess he's be used to this by now, wouldn't he? And the sky background looking kinda empty aside from a few clouds, maybe some moon or a rising sun would've been neat but Potatoman and the chopper did a fine job at filling-up space.
Still, really cool. Have you thought about selling some of these as posters?

ChazDude responds:

I'll go and add those links, brb.

One thing I probably should've done was fill the top-right corner with some more stuff, but thanks for the input!

As for posters, I'll have to look into that.

[Room With A View]

Ya gotta love Dave's psychotic attitude towards life.

The art is really great and i'm liking the lighting effects you're putting on each of your latest comics but maybe work a bit more on the humour? Some are really funny, others not so much and rely more on shock value, it's not bad just very hit and miss.

ChazDude responds:

I can see what you mean, there are times when I'm in a writer's block and one of Dave's psychotic moments is the only thing I can come up with.

[Tooth]

This reminds me so much of a snake eating it's own tail in a never ending cycle.

I'm guessing Carl got all those fans from recording and posting online other stuff Dave's done throughout the years? Could be neat if there was a future comic where Dave would discover he's intenetz famous.

Keep up the good work, your strips are getting more detailed as time goes by.

ChazDude responds:

Lol, how many more ideas do you have up your sleeve? :)

[Easter]

Originality in this one is off the charts.
It's only a shame that it only started to make sense when the guy celebrating ɹǝdd∩ appeared (unless i was missing the references with the Wester, Norther and Souther guys).

ChazDude responds:

Those guys are probably from some kind of parallel universe or something.

[Hide-n-Seek Pt.2]

Ha, love Dave's expression on the 8th panel.
Is this really the 100th time they've died? Did you go out of your way and count every time they died in a comic?

ChazDude responds:

Not including serious/seemingly-fatal injuries and off-screen deaths:

Dave - 58
Carl - 41

This includes upcoming strips I've already drawn.

Damnit, I was way off.

[Request: Dave & Carl Matrix]

Ha, noice.
Really good job with putting Cypher in, i didn't even remember he was in the poster.

Feels like there's too much empty space at the top but the green numbers scrolling down do a neat job in hiding it for the most part.

Thanks man, this really made my day.

ChazDude responds:

Thanks m8, with the numbers I was literally just mashing the keyboard.

[Bomb]

Good job with the shading, the Matrix effect and the flashing light in the 6th panel.

Punchline was a bit weak, though. And that's usually what's best about your comics.

Now i wanna see a Matrix poster but with Dave, Carl and Dave's sister (is she his sister?).

ChazDude responds:

Thanks for reviewing, I'll see about the poster

[Mind The Gap]

Heh, funny stuff.
It could've used an extra square between the 4th and 5th one to show him being dragged into the line better, it was a bit too sudden but i might be over-analyzing it. Maybe if the first square wasn't there and instead the second one was in it's place? Then there should've been enough room for a new panel.
Just my opinion, though.

I really liked the PotatoMan poster in the background, upcoming PotatoMan animation/comic perhaps?

ChazDude responds:

A Potatoman Origins comic I've actually been seriously considering, separate from the main D&C series. Perhaps as a choose your own adventure kind of thing.

[Pixel Dave & Carl]

Wooooo, two art submissions in one day? Noice.
I was hoping you'd do a pixel comic of Dave and Carl but seeing all your characters pixelated is just as cool!
Happy Dixel Pay.

ChazDude responds:

I honestly tried to come up with a pixel comic idea, but I sort of let it slide.

Oh well, maybe next year?

[Where's Carl?]

Very funny.
Pacing of the jokes was great, it never felt like there was a dull moment while reading this, it's also a very colourful edition of the Dave & Carl series.
I especially liked how Carl reacted when he woke up and saw Dave there, showed that maybe he was getting a bit too sick of all the shenanigans. Imminent vacation from Dave perhaps?

Great job, looking forward for the 500th edition of your comics and every other comic in between.

ChazDude responds:

Thanks for the comments and happy new year, Rad c:

Mark my words; #500 will blow your mind.