Radaketor's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Man in Space]

Good job on the background and that Rubik's cube looks funky.
I think the astronaut would've looked better if he was only in white with some black spots and lines here and there to show depth and shadow.

Zerodecoole responds:

Thanks!

[Plant]

Ha, pretty funny.
Was this another reference to a certain BBS user?
That background felt a tad bit empty, though, especially in the last 4 squares, it could've used a plant or some more windows to fill it up.

ChazDude responds:

Yeah, I realize now how easy it'd be to do more windows at least >.<

Also, tell amy I said hi.

[Space Off]

This opens the doors to so many possibilities, like side comics where they're doing missions for the agency for example.
Lengthy and pretty funny, nice job!

ChazDude responds:

Thanks, Radaka c:

Side comics might be a fun idea, too.

[Dress]

Heh, funny. I notice that Dave's sister appears to be getting balder throughout the comic, was that made intentionally or am i just seeing it wrong?
Looking forward to your 300th comic, i remember your 250th Dave and Carl was pretty cool.

ChazDude responds:

You're probably just seeing it wrong, her hair is pretty hard to draw compared to Dave.

And yes, 300 will blow your mind's anus.

[Election]

Finally someone else understands my secret obsession for David.

ChazDude responds:

Dave & David, friends 4 eva

[Psychotic Solider!]

You seem to be getting better, congrats!
The gun needs some work, it looks dented.

Mr-Insanity97 responds:

Oh ok and thank you.

[Nevada Postcard]

Cool, Hank and Jebus look a bit smaller than they probably should, though.

ChazDude responds:

I've been aware of that for ages, I should really pay attention to my scaling.

[Sexual assault comic]

This has the potential to be very educational in the matter of sexual assault, wouldn't mind seeing some more of it. Just please don't make this only about women, you'll get a lot of hate if you focus only on women's problems instead of focusing equally on the injustices that both sexes go through.

The top 4 panels were very simplistic, which isn't a bad thing, the first two for example were well done since by my perspective they depicted well the movement of one person in a crowd heading towards another, it also made us know right away who we should be paying attention at, the third and fourth panels, though, weren't so great, they looked crudely drawn and rushed.

The bottom panel and the message was this submission's saving grace, very well drawn with nice proportions although i feel like the collarbones and the boobs could be improved on (one looks clearly bigger than the other).

kgbm responds:

I'm definitely not going to make it purely about women - feminism does that enough as it is (I'm fairly anti-feminism tbh, it goes against actual equality and most feminists disrespect egalitarians like me because "feminism is the only way to equality and if you arent a feminist youre automatically a sexist racist cishet male pig and need to go die" is their mentality)

Tbh the only reason this was my first one in this potential series is because im more confident at drawing women, and it wasnt planned to be this sort of comic thing, it started as just a doodle :)

also future ones will definitely be more refined and in proportion, as i said, this wasnt planned and i will almost certainly re-draw it in a month or so

[Painting of Lauren Cohan]

I liked the shading you did in this and the oil panting style was a good touch.
I think you could potentially improve by adding some more details to your drawings, like for example her boots, her hair, what's going on outside the window, etc.
I also realize it's very complicated to do people's faces sometimes so it's understandable that her face doesn't match 100% her real life counterpart, maybe working a bit more on her eyes, cheeks and cheek lines would help.

kgbm responds:

thankyou for the constructive criticism :) yeah, I definitely have a long way to go before its anywhere close to perfect, but hopefully i'll get there some day (and pressure sensitivity in the tablet im going to get will be a godsend for making it look more like traditional media)

[Knife & Fork]

Funny stuff.
The blurry effect on the last panel was a really nice touch.

ChazDude responds:

I like a bit of blur every now and then.