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Get more people to voice act for you, it's annoying to hear a pre-pubescent kid doing 4 our more voices at the same time not to mention that it makes every character look and sound the same.
Work on your story a bit more also, it was confusing, unfunny and it didn't lead to anything.

MashPlanet responds:

I'm sorry about the same voice but this is all inspiration from knoxs korner, he used his same voice and never wrote a story, he just makes things up as he goes, which is what I do. Thanks for the motivation though.

The characters, objects and backgrounds need a lot of work. They were really badly drawn, i don't know if that was a choice you made to give it a unique style but it didn't work, it's not charming at all.
Same can be said about the voice acting, it sounded bland, the only one who had a (slightly) decent voice was the guy with red hair.

That Kyogre and Groudon makeout scene was hilarious.
Nice animation, not bad voice acting and good jokes, i just don't get it why there was over a minute of nothing more than the credits/subscribe page, 20 seconds should be enough for that.

What a nutty teacher.

Needs a pre-loader so it doesn't keep looping. Newgrounds has some free ones right here http://www.newgrounds.com/downloads/preloaders/
The lip-sync is pretty good but the drawings need more work, it looks like you rushed it.

TheSquad responds:

Thank you for your criticism. It's very appreciated!

From the 2:13 mark all the way to 2:55 there's a weird static noise.
I'm sorry to hear you didn't manage to get in, man.

Raziberry responds:

That weird static noise is a filter. There's more to the story, though. Life goes on.

Fave'd.
I like your stuff, man. Your humour is top notch.
The only part that i think should have some improvements is when you're talking about next week's episode, the background song kinda overlaps (is that even a word?) your voice.

tylerghardin responds:

yeah, i can see what you mean. thank you for the review!

Your voice was so slowed down it was impossible to understand what you were saying.

Very simplistic, not to mention boring.
It could use some sound effects or at least some background noise.

Well done, it could use a pre-loader though.
But why did the victory bells ring if it wasn't really 6 AM?

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