Radaketor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Got a bone to pick]

I love this kind of humour, the timing was just right.

CyanSandwich responds:

Thanks! Glad ya think so.

[Peanut Butter Monster]

The voices need a bit of work, practice a little bit more and you'll get better.

MarcsUniverse responds:

Oke, I'll do that!
I was planning to be more critic about what I use now so :)

[Old Guy VS Fat Guy]

Needs a better jokes if you want to classify this as comedy and for the love of god stop focusing and unfocusing the camera, it's not funny or original, it's just annoying.

fortunateone responds:

yeah I'm kind of a beginner to using cameras. thanks for your comment man, I appreciate your critique

[Russian Adventure Time]

I liked it but i feel it would be better if you had coloured it, it doesn't need to have Adventure Time's colourful nature but some rusty colours like brown, dark yellow, orange, green could've made this much better to set the tone.

[What will you choose?]

Very original!
The lyrics were catchy and neat during most of it and the humour was present throught the whole video.
Great stuff.

[How to Stop Being Fat]

The lip-sync wasn't that great, you should try tweaking it a bit.

SoundChaser responds:

It is in sync, in the original file anyway, but I reckon the high frame rate makes the flash player lag occasionally. Thanks for the pick up though, something to look out for next time. Appreciated.

[Man in the woods]

It looks like you were capable of something more than just a jump scare but you just chose the easy route.

[This is for you.]

Very nice for a first animation.
You managed to convey a very cute story in a short amount of time.
I think the backgrounds could've used some work, having them gain colour with the characters might've worked to your advantage but i understand from your Author Comments that you had some time constraints so it's understandable, you worked with what you had and made the best out of it.
Good job.

Zhon responds:

Hey, thanks! Yeah, looking back on this if I had more time I would have taken it much further. It was a great learning experience in time management too, haha. I appreciate your kind words.

[Explicit]

Great video.
Shows us just the risks of being a musician.

[A True Story about a Man]

Twist ending!