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The voices were alright, the jokes not so good but not terrible either, you need to work more on your character models, though, they looked very basic and for someone who says they've been working on this since November of 2014 they look very lazily done.

Sonicyay2 responds:

im a lazy poo face
thats the truth
(also this is just an ANIMATED version of an existing video, so....would the voice and joke criticisms be to use here? just asking)

This could work as an intro to an animated series, just make it slightly shorter (up until the part where the announcer starts talking would be good enough in my opinion).
The music keeps playing once the animation itself stops so if you replay it you start hearing two tracks.

The voices need some more work as do the character designs, definitely some space to improve but decent nonetheless.

HDRevill responds:

Yeah this was a REALLY old animation of mine, i feel that i've improved alot since then :)

Colour always helps, it gives more life to your animations and it makes it look more professional.
Voice work was fine but it could use some improvements.

doondeka responds:

I disagree with your outlook on the coloring style. However, I'd say that you were spot-on with the VA'ing and I'll intend to use better recording equipment next time around.

The voice acting was really good, Squidward and Patrick's voices were really close to the original (or at least the ones in my country), the story was a good mix of surreal and comedy, i just wish it was a bit longer so it felt more like an episode than a short fanimation.

The voice acting could do some work, it sometimes glitches out, not sure if that's a problem only i've faced with thsi animation.
If this had some better voice acting i could see this getting a much higher score.

Funny short you have here. There's one little problem though, the camera seems to be unfocused when there's a close up of their faces, that doesn't look very good on an animation.
But still, pretty soid movie nonetheless.

LSanimation responds:

Thanks for the feedback! :)

You could've drawn a Pikachu instead of just his arm and why was this +18?

Nice animation. It was cool to see the coin get back at its former owner but the passage of time wasn't so clear so i had no idea years had gone by after he first lost his coin.

It's nice to see how much you've improved over the years.
The voice acting wasn't that great but it was decent enough, some parts were a bit harder to understand because of the background music (Drowning Pool, huh? now i know you were 15 when you did this).
It was a bit choppy at times but you were making movies for how long before this? A year or two? So it's completely forgivable.

Good animation, dude, glad i finally got to watching this.

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