It was pretty fluid for a stick fight animation and the music was very badass.
It was pretty fluid for a stick fight animation and the music was very badass.
The animation was fluid and very colourful in certain parts, i liked it, i just wish i knew the context of what was happening, maybe you should link us to the video you got this from in the Author Comments.
There was really no context, they got in the house and I guess "story time" started, haha. Here it is tho! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xHWN_E7wVJk and I'm glad you liked the animation :)
Never thought you'd ever venture out to the world of animating (now that i checked your profile i can see you've already submitted one other movie before this one, ups).
The animation style was fine, very fluid with no really big flaws, maybe just the top and bottom grey stripe could've been removed.
I did notice the grey stripes, I might just mention that to Comicdud.
But anyway, thanks for the review!
The voices sounded funny, not good funny, just bad funny. I guess it has to do with the microphone you used or the edditing you did to the voices.
The animation wasn't that bad, maybe vary it up a bit next time instead of just having them puke at eachother for more than half of the video's length.
Everything looked pretty good in this one, the sound effects were alright, the style was good, there weren't any moments filled with silence because we had at least some background noise this time around (even though i think some music from those old silent movies would've been better), the comedy was nicely done and the environment was colourful.
Good job.
I like the art style and the humour but i think you could add some more background music during the silent parts, they felt very lazily done because of that.
Too bad that you couldn't fix the lag, this could've easily been a four stars animation if it wasn't for that problem.
Navi's voice is annoying, like it should be, Link's voice was rather interesting.
Could've used some more work on the backgrounds, adding more clouds, a sun, a few birds flying by, maybe mountains and such. I also feel like the ending part where Link's running around should've been more silly, maybe if he had a bag of rupees on his hand and he was chasing a chicken (or better yet, being chased by chickens) it could've worked better.
Dang I was actually going to add in the cuccos, but I decided not to. Oh well, maybe my next cartoon will be better.
Very realistic of how we treat new users.
The humour was great with perfect timing, the voice acting was so and so, not that great but also not bad by any means.
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