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This is why the Playstation is superior.
Anyways, nice animation and good voice acting, i felt like the guy in red should've had a quirky remark at the end there.
It could also use some background to make it more colourful or and realistic.

Dahakka responds:

To him, that xbox was the best thing in his life. now he will have to go on each day knowing that his own boasting killed the very thing he loved..

I think the funniest part about this is that i kept expecting something to happen and nothing did.
Could you some sound effects or some background noise at least (maybe some birds chirping).

The voices need some work, they sounded the same and were pretty monotonous.

The story and jokes were boring and unfunny but what really stood out was the crappy voice-acting, most of the times i could barely hear what the characters were saying.
Kudos for the decent animating though, it looks fluid enough and at least you put some colouring into it.

Your fascination for feces is both intriguing and disturbing.

The voices need to be a bit higher, it was hard for me to hear them talk.

I liked this, the animation was decent even though it's a bit simple.
Some colour would help make this animation stand out, you could use dark colours instead of strong colourful ones for example.
Also, Newgrounds offers free pre-loaders here: http://www.newgrounds.com/downloads/preloaders/ if you'd like to use one, it won't make your movie loop.

I liked this, the animation was well done (although it looks a bit rushed) and the jokes were funny.
You just need to practice your voice acting a little more or get better voice actors.

CosmicArt responds:

thanks for the comment, haha a little or a lot practice, I'm trying to work on as many projects as i can so hopefully I'll get better. I usually record in my dorm room which has thins walls, so I'm usually iffy about being too loud, but I'm getting over it.

Doesn't look so bad for an ad.
You should put a pre-loader so it doesn't keep looping, though.
Newgrounds offers some free pre-loaders here: http://www.newgrounds.com/downloads/preloaders/

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