The animation needs a few tweacks here and there, i didn't really understand if it was supposed to be like that or not.
The animation needs a few tweacks here and there, i didn't really understand if it was supposed to be like that or not.
Yeah, I tried to clean it up as best as I could.
Thanks for the rating!
I don't get why he was a rooster but okay...
He's a turkey from a thanksgiving special.
Meh, not bad, the animation could use a little work though, and from the "ending" i'm gonna assume there's gonna be a part 2.
Yep you are right ,there's gonna be a part 2
This doesn't work...
It does for me!
His eye-lashes, dear god his eye lashes!
No offense but the mid-life crisis joke just saved this whole animation, the rest was all kinda bland.
Hehe, whoa, this a blast to the past! I made this animation nearly four years ago!
You're probably right, I'm pretty sure I recall this one being pretty slowly paced until the end. To be honest though, I haven't even seen this cartoon in years, and I don't really feel like looking back at it right now since, as you noted, I recall most of it not being particularly interesting. Thanks for the review though! I always appreciate it! :)
The god damn audio gets too high pitched at some points.
The emo kid also didn't have much of a role, it was basically just grandpa talking alone and grumbling and all that.
When you say the audio gets too "high pitched" are you referring to Grandpa's voice getting too high pitched? Or are you referring to volume and general sound quality, because I know I should probably try to improve that in future animations...
Maaaaaaaaybe work a bit more on the plot next time.
Yes i know; this is a pilot work :)
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