Radaketor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Never Knew]

pretty gay bro

[Oney Plays Animated: Oney vs Jason]

what a funny little video about a funny little boy

[Understanding Women]

damn that bitch's got a fuckable voice

[Apex cucks Fortnite]

if he'd done the hype dance he'd still be alive and erect

[HELLEVATOR]

Ok this needs to become a series, or if not then just have one or two (possibly shorter) sequels just to see what happens next, even if that's basically only meeting new characters and making chaos all over the multiverse.
Nice homage to the Archer artstyle as well.

[Crust]

God, the way they all talked came out so naturally, seemed more like a couple of friends talking to one another than people reading a script.
Would really like to see this turned into a short series, maybe? The mole and worm have a lot of chemistry together, making it delightful to sit through.

[NG Chat 2016]

Glorious, yurgie, glorious.
Just needs the feature of writing your own posts and immediately after doing so you get banned.

[new phone]

Really nice, even better considering the PC problems you had before/while working on this.
I especially like the lip-sync and the character's facial expressions all look like how they should for each situation and emotion, doesn't seem like you tried to cut-corners with that which is always great!

Something i think could be improved is the space management, for example that cashier girl's first frames show her next to the counter but there's a lot of free space around her, i think maybe filling it up with some more counters (even if empty) wouldn't be such a bad idea.
There were also a few moments where the voice actor's breath hit the mic and sort of ruined the immersion but they weren't too bad nor common, i'm also sure you can find some tips online on how to prevent doing it in the future.

Hope to see a bunch more of your shorts here on NG. Think you really fit with the style and type of humor people have around here.

tylerghardin responds:

hey thanks for such a great review! I think I was inspired by Rick and morty regarding mouth shapes... I used to just use standard shapes but this time I wanted it to be funnier (probably to at least amp up the dry story lol).

I agree on adding more things, particularly on shot 2. and even though I have a bomb ass mic now, I had yet to get an interface when I began making this over a month ago. so I had to use my iPhone and what you hear is the lack of a pop filter. it bothers me but hopefully it doesn't take away too much.

thanks again for the review.

[What Chu Got? Ep 1]

Hah, pretty good, that little Flintstones reference at the end was also pretty nice.
Maybe next time Conroy can pull out something from another video game as well? For example a Portal gun.

[PicoDay 2k16]

The Trump hate animations are starting t get a bit old now, it's not as funny nor smart to make one where the premise is basically, "Oh Trump destroyed the USA after winning the elections now someone has to stop them", so i'll have to take some points from you for doing it, although that was just what i thought the story was about, please correct me if i was wrong.

Seeing a Madness grunt out of nowhere was a bit weird, i think if other mascots were shown it would've been a lot more interesting, for example Alien Hominid, Dad, Nene, the Dad 'n' Me family and others, it looked just like a random cameo.

Maybe next time try to work on removing the static from the sound effects? It could get kind of annoying at times.

Still, it's a pretty decent animation, keep up the good work.