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[Charmander Cant Cope]

Nidoking's walk cycle could use some work, it's kinda silly just seeing him jump towards Squirtle and Charmander instead of seeing him take a simple step forward.
The colours, shading and light effects were decent, as were the character designs.
The voices could use some work, maybe it was a mic problem but they didn't sound that well done.
Aside from Nidoking's walk cycle and the voice acting it was alright.

HDRevill responds:

I appreciate the feedback buddy! :]

[Starbomb - Inky's Lament]

Nice, fluid, well timed and colourful animation.
You managed to express the ghost's emotions very well.

EpicSaveRoom responds:

Thanks!

[Lost]

Really liked the art style of this and watching it on both the mother and the child's perspectives was an interesting idea, the music ranged from creepy and disturbing to cheerful and nice really well.
Didn't really want it to have a sad ending because that's what i was kinda predicting, still, very nicely done.

Big-Bad-Bombus responds:

Thanks a lot for your feedback, and yeah I'm partial to sad endings. Glad you liked it though!

[Alfred Nobel]

You should add educational to your tags for this movie, if you could add a pre-loader to this it would help as well and it wouldn't make this loop.

CharlieJindra responds:

how do you add a tag?

[Barack Obama Poetry]

Try to tone down the background music in the next videos or we can't understand what the person is saying (you said this was your first video of the series so you might've fixed that problem already, if you have, my bad).
The character models could also use more work, they look too flat and badly drawn.
I did enjoy the humour, though.

ShowemPoems responds:

Thanks for the review. I've been having trouble with the dialogue to music mix. Seems like it shouldn't be that hard and yet the music is always just a bit too loud. I'll keep working on it.
I've posted the second one. It's under judgement right now. Hopefully, the mix is better on that one.

[depressing stories]

Very artsy, i liked the hand drawn art style that you had here, sometimes this style doesn't work well with animations but this time it did.
The narrator's voice was a bit too robotic and unnerving, though.

dylan responds:

"and they didn't even put up a fight"

- beyoncé, 2008

[HTMFNaF2NSA]

The voices were alright, the jokes not so good but not terrible either, you need to work more on your character models, though, they looked very basic and for someone who says they've been working on this since November of 2014 they look very lazily done.

Sonicyay2 responds:

im a lazy poo face
thats the truth
(also this is just an ANIMATED version of an existing video, so....would the voice and joke criticisms be to use here? just asking)

[Pokemon - Cut]

The voices need some more work as do the character designs, definitely some space to improve but decent nonetheless.

HDRevill responds:

Yeah this was a REALLY old animation of mine, i feel that i've improved alot since then :)

[Black-Hole-Kin]

Colour always helps, it gives more life to your animations and it makes it look more professional.
Voice work was fine but it could use some improvements.

doondeka responds:

I disagree with your outlook on the coloring style. However, I'd say that you were spot-on with the VA'ing and I'll intend to use better recording equipment next time around.

[My New Girlfriend (2015)]

Funny short you have here. There's one little problem though, the camera seems to be unfocused when there's a close up of their faces, that doesn't look very good on an animation.
But still, pretty soid movie nonetheless.

LSanimation responds:

Thanks for the feedback! :)