Radaketor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Deleting your Computer]

I liked the way that the music went along with the animation but the character designs weren't that great.

dmarkovic responds:

thanks man (: ill try harder next time

[Happy Valentine]

Very little animation and comedy, the lip sync was a bit off and it sometimes wasn't even there, the voice acting wasn't the worst i've ever seen but it was pretty bad, they were pretty bland and boring.

Try to improve on the jokes, the voice acting, the lip sync and just the whole animation in general.

Xensomi responds:

Well humor is nothing but a matter of taste so what you think is boring might be something I laugh at.

But I do know the other stuff needs loads of work.

Thx for your comment :)

[Next Quest - Bards]

I'm not sure if this was an intentional joke but the guy speaking spanish's lines weren't the same as what his subtitles said.

I liked the style of this, it reminded me a bit of South Park except with dark outlines, the humour was pretty original and nice.
Looking forward for more episodes.

mattyburrito responds:

Yes that was intentional haha

Thank you for the comment! I'm hard at work trying to make more of these as fast as I can. I'm glad you find the humor original!

[Got a bone to pick]

I love this kind of humour, the timing was just right.

CyanSandwich responds:

Thanks! Glad ya think so.

[Peanut Butter Monster]

The voices need a bit of work, practice a little bit more and you'll get better.

MarcsUniverse responds:

Oke, I'll do that!
I was planning to be more critic about what I use now so :)

[Old Guy VS Fat Guy]

Needs a better jokes if you want to classify this as comedy and for the love of god stop focusing and unfocusing the camera, it's not funny or original, it's just annoying.

fortunateone responds:

yeah I'm kind of a beginner to using cameras. thanks for your comment man, I appreciate your critique

[How to Stop Being Fat]

The lip-sync wasn't that great, you should try tweaking it a bit.

SoundChaser responds:

It is in sync, in the original file anyway, but I reckon the high frame rate makes the flash player lag occasionally. Thanks for the pick up though, something to look out for next time. Appreciated.

[This is for you.]

Very nice for a first animation.
You managed to convey a very cute story in a short amount of time.
I think the backgrounds could've used some work, having them gain colour with the characters might've worked to your advantage but i understand from your Author Comments that you had some time constraints so it's understandable, you worked with what you had and made the best out of it.
Good job.

Zhon responds:

Hey, thanks! Yeah, looking back on this if I had more time I would have taken it much further. It was a great learning experience in time management too, haha. I appreciate your kind words.

[Change in Emotion]

This is why the Playstation is superior.
Anyways, nice animation and good voice acting, i felt like the guy in red should've had a quirky remark at the end there.
It could also use some background to make it more colourful or and realistic.

Dahakka responds:

To him, that xbox was the best thing in his life. now he will have to go on each day knowing that his own boasting killed the very thing he loved..

[Runner]

I liked this, the animation was well done (although it looks a bit rushed) and the jokes were funny.
You just need to practice your voice acting a little more or get better voice actors.

CosmicArt responds:

thanks for the comment, haha a little or a lot practice, I'm trying to work on as many projects as i can so hopefully I'll get better. I usually record in my dorm room which has thins walls, so I'm usually iffy about being too loud, but I'm getting over it.